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Heartbreak
Like glass when shattered,
Pieces lying there,
Waiting, waiting
To be fixed and catered.

The pain of separation
Is like a bear baring its claws,
Tearing my heart for its consumption.
Why isnít it against the laws?

A promise made in such haste,
What a total waste.
Never to be broken.
Never to be together.
Forever apart.
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The promise now broken
Hoping it will last
Happiness reborn
Together forever.
this is dedicated to seigaku as he and someone in the clss broke up... and they promised not to go back together... but they broke it... therefore the last stagma[sp?]

I DID NOT DRAW THE PICTURE.
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nightwolf8 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2007
thats part of how i feel...:crying:
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janejy-chan Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2006
sad...but Doraemon! hehehe... :XD:
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Mintblue Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2003   Writer
This is so good!!! (^-^)b So sad too... Made me overwhelmed with emotions... *sigh* Good job~!
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SHF Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2003
thanks so much for the comment!! *hands tissue paper*
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bluetiger47 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2003
- Man, this is cute + sad at the same time >_<....:)
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SHF Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2003
cute? okaaay... I guess it's the simlies/metaphors I used ne~

thanks for the comment!
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mitsuu Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2003
OMG DORAEMON MY FAVORITE ANIME WHEN I WAS LITTLE! hahah its ok, just practice drawing na, no one's ever hopeless. ^^
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SHF Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2003
you never know you never know... but now I have an urge to draw and so.. I guess this is a good sign eh
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mitsuu Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2003
IT IS SO GO FOR IT! don't be discourged if things don't go the way you want in a drawing, the only thing to do is to keep trying! you'll get there in the end na! <3 try!
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SHF Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2003
yupperz! thanks for the advise!!
:hug:
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