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Heartbreak
Like glass when shattered,
Pieces lying there,
Waiting, waiting
To be fixed and catered.

The pain of separation
Is like a bear baring its claws,
Tearing my heart for its consumption.
Why isnít it against the laws?

A promise made in such haste,
What a total waste.
Never to be broken.
Never to be together.
Forever apart.
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The promise now broken
Hoping it will last
Happiness reborn
Together forever.
this is dedicated to seigaku as he and someone in the clss broke up... and they promised not to go back together... but they broke it... therefore the last stagma[sp?]

I DID NOT DRAW THE PICTURE.
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nightwolf8 Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2007
thats part of how i feel...:crying:
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janejy-chan Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2006
sad...but Doraemon! hehehe... :XD:
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Mintblue Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2003   Writer
This is so good!!! (^-^)b So sad too... Made me overwhelmed with emotions... *sigh* Good job~!
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SHF Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2003
thanks so much for the comment!! *hands tissue paper*
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bluetiger47 Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2003
- Man, this is cute + sad at the same time >_<....:)
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SHF Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2003
cute? okaaay... I guess it's the simlies/metaphors I used ne~

thanks for the comment!
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mitsuu Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2003
OMG DORAEMON MY FAVORITE ANIME WHEN I WAS LITTLE! hahah its ok, just practice drawing na, no one's ever hopeless. ^^
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SHF Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2003
you never know you never know... but now I have an urge to draw and so.. I guess this is a good sign eh
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mitsuu Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2003
IT IS SO GO FOR IT! don't be discourged if things don't go the way you want in a drawing, the only thing to do is to keep trying! you'll get there in the end na! <3 try!
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SHF Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2003
yupperz! thanks for the advise!!
:hug:
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seigaku Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2003   Writer
Thank you!! I really like this XD

The pic is also very cute!! Kawai~~~XD

lol~! Thank you again!
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SHF Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2003
thanks for liking it!! you're my inspiration... I did not draw the pic
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myst-o Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2003  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Did you draw the Doraemon? (^____^)
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SHF Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2003
nope... I found it on the net... wanted to draw a broken heart that is mended by scotch tape/ cellotape but... for a pathetic [argh... can't spell again!!] person who cannot draw... that's impossible....
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myst-o Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2003  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Awww~.. tis hokey~! (^^)

Your poem was pretty good... (^,^)b
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SHF Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2003
THANKS!!! :hug:
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myst-o Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2003  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome~!!! (^,^)
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DanielRadcliffeLover Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2003  Hobbyist Writer
AWWWWWW! It's cute but so sad. It really is the truth though.
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SHF Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2003
I have no idea how it feels so... I juz made it all up... but the main "plot" was from a real event tho...

thanks for faving it!!! :hug:
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tatsunoHikari Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2003
awwwwwwwwwwwww... ;o; So sweet... *0* I like the happy ending... X3 Hope it will last too nyo~
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SHF Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2003
wishing for him naw~

what's your reaction when you saw the picture?
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seigaku Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2003   Writer
Soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! !!!!! NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! XD

Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!! > 0<
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SHF Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2003
^__________________^

glad you and her are much better... hope it will last
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tatsunoHikari Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2003
I... snorted. U_U;; Gomenasaaaaiii...

but... Doraemon... *puup*

HAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA!!!

...

o.o; I'm at it again.
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SHF Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2003
o wel... I think you're always at it... as long as you don't dig something out of doreamon's pocket and kill me... then it's fine... I THINK...

BTW, I think you were a pig your last life...
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tatsunoHikari Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2003
o.o; You never know...

>=3 I think I might not have been a pig... WILD pig more like.

[^-- is joking.]
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SHF Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2003
hmmmmmmm... having a best friend that has recarnated from a wild pig... interesting...

I HAVE A BEST FRIEND THAT'S RECARNATED FROM A WILD PIG!!!

:bounce:
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